It's still in double voice but the words are going to intertwine.
AND instead of playing with the public voice vs the personal voice, I'm going to
play with the "euphemism-filled" voice vs the "straight-to-the-point" voice.
It's a bring-back of my old poem: http://sheerpulchritude.blogspot.com/2008/11/our-unmade-bed.html
and a mix of the real voice within me. The "this is what I REALLY mean" voice.
So Red will represent the words that are shared between the two voices.
And Purple will be the euphemist voice.
And Yellow will be the THIS IS FRRLZ voice.
Why
do we make our beds? do I yearn for you?
Do we make them just to Do I love you just to
ruin
them? us?
Or do we ruin them just to Or do I ruin us when I
make
them? love to you?
Tell me which one is more
tedious.
To just Do I
keep
it ruined and never make it? ignoring you and somehow fake it?
Or to somehow keep it made and Or do I fix this again and
never
RUIN it? quit us?
So let's keep this bed un-made How about we call us quits
isn't that always easier?
1 comment:
genius, haha.
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